She was the bright sunshine,
in the lives of many sad souls.
But she was neither yours nor mine;
she belonged to a facade of control.
Her beauty was in her words,
but eloquence evaded her tongue.
Her smiles were like painted birds-
always flying; never perched, never sung.
Existing only at the center,
she fades around the edges,
which, to non-existence, tether.
Among people she builds bridges.
Inside her own, she is destruction abound;
inside her soul, nothing but self hate is found.
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Okay! I give up, what’s the answer to the riddle? 🙂
😉
Intriguing title and the poems adds even more curiosity to the story between the lines…
Thank you so very much!
Beautifully executed. So sad that that the warmth of self love cannot enter.
Thank you so much randomrose! 🙂
Always appreciate a sonnet…
Thank you! 🙂
oh my gosh, so beautiful, it is like you wrote abut me! Okay, going back to read again!
Thank you for reading and it touches me that you could relate to it.
you’re welcome, have a lovely weekend!
WOW. I am spellbound. *.*
Aww thank you justmadstuff! Didn’t know it could have such an effect. 🙂
I like this a lot. I’m a sucker for a sonnet. I can relate to it a bit. Thanks for stopping by blog, too.
~ Audrey
Thank you too! 🙂
Wow, this is rich. I especially like “smiles like painted birds”–excellent!
Thank you! 🙂
Lovely!
Thank you!
Reminds me of the these lyrics!
“Eloquent”
by Sanctus Real
I’m as eloquent as an elephant
’bout as headstrong as the Mighty King Kong
on a rampage, throwing airplanes
I can’t believe you haven’t gone away,
gone away…
I am difficult, argumentative
’bout as thick skulled as the dinosaur bones on a display in a glass case
I can’t believe you haven’t run away,
run away….
It must be different through your eyes
because you look at me like it’s the first time,
the first time you’ve ever seen my face
I’m preoccupied with a crowded mind
I get off track like a train rolling back to the future
Never too sure who’ll be here when I come back around,
but I’m finding out…
It must be different through your eyes
because you look at me like it’s the first time,
the first time you’ve ever seen…
It must be different through your eyes
because you look at me like it’s the first time,
the first time you’ve ever seen my face
Would I see you the way that you see me?
I don’t understand the way you see me
It must be different through your eyes
because you look at me like it’s the first time,
the first time you’ve ever seen my face
And it must be different in your eyes
Would you look at me like it’s the first time
you’ve ever seen my face?
My face…
Would you look at me like it’s the first time
that you’ve ever seen my face?
Thank you for sharing! 🙂