14 comments

  1. AnElephantCant · March 29, 2014

    Never more alone than when together.
    AnElephant can relate to this excellent piece.

  2. piercingthroughthewinds · March 29, 2014

    Brilliant 🙂

  3. Samanthamj · March 29, 2014

    Not a good feeling… and all too common…
    Nicely written.

  4. Silent~Dugood · March 29, 2014

    Yes, when you die to be closer to someone, then when they are with you, the emptiness that comes in between most relationships is usually what drive them apart. Distance, can be mentally as well as physically. The worst in my opinion is mentally.

    • anumshafique · March 30, 2014

      I agree! Mental distance is the worst, when you can see a person, hear them, talk to them, yet find them so so far away from you. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating! 🙂

  5. randomrose · March 30, 2014

    So much said in so few words. Love it.

    • anumshafique · March 30, 2014

      Thank you randomrose, as always! 🙂 🙂

  6. Shafiq Haider Virk · March 30, 2014

    Tera wajood teray maujood na honay mein hai
    Ye hona teray na honay he mein hai….

    • anumshafique · March 31, 2014

      Bilkul. Aap nay meri baat ki teh bayan kar dee. Parhanay ka bohat shukaria.

  7. Starralee · March 31, 2014

    Definitely had this experience before. Good concise poetry.

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