19 comments

  1. stanjonagasaki · March 31, 2014

    Reality can many times supersede the dream state, though through dreams there is a kind of sanctity, or mesmerizing effect that is almost impossible to achieve in the awakened state. Very refreshing to see syncope used; been so long since I last saw it. 😛

    • anumshafique · March 31, 2014

      😀 Thank you. Indeed, the experience of reality as opposed to dreaming is like brushing your hair on your head as opposed to watching yourself brushing it in the mirror. 🙂

  2. I can identify with this one. Loved it!!

  3. farankarem · April 9, 2014

    Sounds like a lucky person!

  4. farankarem · April 12, 2014

    The person is always in your unconscious thoughts! It sometimes sucks to be in that situation. .it can evolve to an obsession. Then, that person might loose intrest since there is nothing more to reveal. I did that and it feels good because I can move on now…or can I?

    • anumshafique · April 13, 2014

      To be in a such a state of mind can hardly be deemed lucky, or can it? 😛

      • farankarem · April 13, 2014

        Depends, if you are the one being thought about. But, does one deserve such affection truly from the heart. Especially, if you never met them in person, or you can keep feeding at the unknown destiny?

        • anumshafique · April 13, 2014

          What if you have met them and what if your destiny is not as unknown as you would like it to be? Just a thought.

          • farankarem · April 13, 2014

            No problems shall be on getting wedded then, perhaps?

            • anumshafique · April 13, 2014

              LOL, or perhaps, it has nothing to do with romance and weddings?

              • farankarem · April 13, 2014

                Ah got ya! You’re creating fiction?

                • anumshafique · April 13, 2014

                  Haha, the poem is not about weddings and romance from my end. But it can be about all that at your end, if you want it to be. 🙂 When it comes to perceiving art, it is not necessary that the creator’s perception is the only right perception: there is, perhaps, no right perception at all.
                  And yes, I am always creating fiction. 😉

                  • farankarem · April 13, 2014

                    Haven’t quite found wifey material, and not in a rush. Check out my blog…I’m the opossite from creating fiction. I just scream my encounters into writings..kiya tum Pakistani ho?

                    • anumshafique · April 13, 2014

                      Sure.
                      Yes, I am a Pakistani.

                    • farankarem · April 13, 2014

                      Cool, so am I. Are you residing there currently?

                    • anumshafique · April 13, 2014

                      Yes. What about you?

                    • farankarem · April 13, 2014

                      Canada.

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