If dreaming about you is so intense,
what would be to meet you?
To talk to you would be heavenly,
but
to hear you speak-fatality;
to see you, in person-syncope;
to feel you, touch you-dyspnea!
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If dreaming about you is so intense,
what would be to meet you?
To talk to you would be heavenly,
but
to hear you speak-fatality;
to see you, in person-syncope;
to feel you, touch you-dyspnea!
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Reality can many times supersede the dream state, though through dreams there is a kind of sanctity, or mesmerizing effect that is almost impossible to achieve in the awakened state. Very refreshing to see syncope used; been so long since I last saw it. 😛
😀 Thank you. Indeed, the experience of reality as opposed to dreaming is like brushing your hair on your head as opposed to watching yourself brushing it in the mirror. 🙂
I can identify with this one. Loved it!!
Thank you so much!
Sounds like a lucky person!
Really? Why so?
The person is always in your unconscious thoughts! It sometimes sucks to be in that situation. .it can evolve to an obsession. Then, that person might loose intrest since there is nothing more to reveal. I did that and it feels good because I can move on now…or can I?
To be in a such a state of mind can hardly be deemed lucky, or can it? 😛
Depends, if you are the one being thought about. But, does one deserve such affection truly from the heart. Especially, if you never met them in person, or you can keep feeding at the unknown destiny?
What if you have met them and what if your destiny is not as unknown as you would like it to be? Just a thought.
No problems shall be on getting wedded then, perhaps?
LOL, or perhaps, it has nothing to do with romance and weddings?
Ah got ya! You’re creating fiction?
Haha, the poem is not about weddings and romance from my end. But it can be about all that at your end, if you want it to be. 🙂 When it comes to perceiving art, it is not necessary that the creator’s perception is the only right perception: there is, perhaps, no right perception at all.
And yes, I am always creating fiction. 😉
Haven’t quite found wifey material, and not in a rush. Check out my blog…I’m the opossite from creating fiction. I just scream my encounters into writings..kiya tum Pakistani ho?
Sure.
Yes, I am a Pakistani.
Cool, so am I. Are you residing there currently?
Yes. What about you?
Canada.